You’ve thoroughly rewritten “Lebanon’s top Shiite cleric Fadlallah dies at 75” and the paragraph we criticized has been changed. Thank you. (The old version can still be read here: http://www.jpost.com/MiddleEast/Article.aspx?id=180375 and in many other publications the world over.)
The new, much longer report, now is full of nuances and elucidates and educates. It is interesting and worthy of AP.
Keep up the good work!