Parents say Israel abandoned son held in Gaza

Dear Editor,

I asked you a few hours ago to write a long report on kidnapped conscript Gilad Shalit and I was very pleased to see that you did just that.

“Parents say Israel abandoned son held in Gaza” is extensive and not offensive. Except maybe, the headline – it would have been better not to make the attempt of his parents to lobby for his release the main theme of the piece. Now it reads as if Israel is to blame. How about “Captured soldier in Gaza everyone’s son in Israel” instead?

Thank you,

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