Israel says activists prepared for fight on ship

Dear Editor,

I found “Israel says activists prepared for fight on ship” by JOSEF FEDERMAN, Associated Press Writer, informative and fair – which should be normal but in Middle-East reporting is often rather exceptional & refreshing. Well done!

My only wish for improvement concerns the last sentence: “Also, most Gazans blame Israel for their hardships, not Hamas.” I’m not sure if that’s true.

I would prefer it to end after that with “If that is truly their opinion or merely the result of a lack of freedom to speak out, will stay everyone’s guess for the time being.”

Shalom from Jerusalem,

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