I found “Israel says activists prepared for fight on ship” by JOSEF FEDERMAN, Associated Press Writer, informative and fair – which should be normal but in Middle-East reporting is often rather exceptional & refreshing. Well done!
My only wish for improvement concerns the last sentence: “Also, most Gazans blame Israel for their hardships, not Hamas.” I’m not sure if that’s true.
I would prefer it to end after that with “If that is truly their opinion or merely the result of a lack of freedom to speak out, will stay everyone’s guess for the time being.”
Shalom from Jerusalem,